In the holiday I went to the Hoyts cinemas at Sylvia Park, Parakai hot springs and play Fortnite.
At Hoyts we watched The Early Man. It was all about Soccer it was pretty boring but I enjoyed it. as soon as we got back from the movies we just played outside for the rest of the day
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Hey Kaden! Im Ella from Grey Main School T3. I like how you have explained where you went and what you did! Maybe next time you can finish your sentences and use more detailed words. Other then that your piece of writing is pretty good so far! Is this the whole story or only a little bit of it? Well done!
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