Monday, 6 August 2018

my first day of school

It was the first day of school and I was terrified. As soon as my
Mum and Dad went, I would never stop crying until morning tea.

Then a few days later. We had cross country. I had butterflies in
my tummy (I was nervous). The year ones were up first and i was scared.
Ready set go and we were off.

We had to run around seven corners and ran for zero point five
kilometres around the school. I was coming forth then I zoomed pass
germane then troy and I was coming second. It was up to me and Toni,
I was running with Toni but then at the last second Toni started to pick up
the speed and came first.

I felt really good because it was my first time in cross country. After the race
my mum bought me some MC Donald's to celebrate.

1 comment:

  1. Very impressive that you can remember your first few days of school. Congratulations on coming second in the cross country! I love the detail you used to describe your run.
    Just watch out for some of the punctuation, for example "Ready set go and we were off" would be better written with commas like "Ready, set, go, and we were off."
    Keep up the great work!